im waking up to your voice,
as it echoes in my head.
ive tried so hard to let you go,
i hate those things i said.
this time wont be like the others,
i promise this is real.
even when it hurts me
i cant change the way i feel.
you wanted me to smile,
im not happy anymore.
i try to pick myself up
but my heart's nailed to the floor.
i have no strength left in me,
but do you care at all?
you only want to lift me up
to see how far i fall.
its not so easy wishing,
when those wishes dont come true.
ive been standing here so long,
now im done waiting for you.
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its not very long, but im ready to move on.
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anyway it's a great poem! you got a fav
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obviously the only rational solution is suicide
i want to be what i was when i wanted to be what i am now.
please look at my gallery....
thank you!
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"Live as if everyone is watching!" - Truman
As for the title? Another Untitled is alright - if you can think of anything better then fine, but honestly? It's kind of... Poignant. As if the relationship mentioned in this poem is something you can't really give a name.
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have you ever thrown a fistful of glitter in the air?
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[kristen]
you say that we cant stop the rain,
you tell me that we all can change.
but thanks lots!
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[kristen]
you say that we cant stop the rain,
you tell me that we all can change.
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[kristen]
you say that we cant stop the rain,
you tell me that we all can change.
and i wish i had the strength i portray in my poetry.
too bad thats not always the case..
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[kristen]
you say that we cant stop the rain,
you tell me that we all can change.
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**every little thing. is going to be alright.
my gallery: [link]
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